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My family poem
Posted: Apr 28, 2020 by: A Richards (arichards) on: Mars, Mercury & Jupiter
Week commencing 20th April 2020
The children have written ‘fictional’ poems about their families.
Layla’s poem
My family have been so annoying during the last week of lockdown because...
My sister did not let me play with the dollies
My dogs kept barking at the tractors in the field behind my house
My mum did not let me play on her phone
My dad told me off for leaving mess all over the floor
My cats took up the whole of the sofa when they came in, in the evenings
But I would not change anything
Blake’s poem
My family was so annoying yesterday
Firstly my brother made me play cricket
Then my Mum said she’d chuck my ipad out of the window then swore
My Dad kissed my Mum in front of me
My Grandma forgot to bring the chocolates
My Grumps told a story over and over again
And my Uncle pushed me off the bed.
But today I wouldn't swap them for anything.
Neve’s poem
My family were so annoying yesterday
My mum ate all the chocolate and I found the wrappers
My dad hid the iPad so we wouldn’t argue
My brother made me play football then kicked it over the fence
Olivia the guinea pig escaped from her pen so I shouted to dad who chased her back again
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