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Five Minutes More Poem
Posted: May 17, 2020 by: A Richards (arichards) on: Mars, Mercury & Jupiter
1st May
Today the children have had to write a rhyming poem trying to persuade their grown up to stay up for 'Five minutes more'.
Noah's poem
Five minutes, five minutes more, please! Let me stay five minutes more!
Can’t I just finish the chapter,
It’s about a magical door?
Can’t I just sit outside and watch the bats,
Fluttering overhead?
Can’t I just clap the NHS?
I don’t want to go to bed!
Can’t I just do some air hockey,
I want to see who wins?
Can’t I just watch the chiminea,
Or we’ll put the paper in the bins!
Levi's Poem
Five minutes, five minutes more, please! Let me stay five minutes more!
Can’t I just finish building my lego car on the spotty table.
Can't I just finish my vw camper book I am sure I am able.
Can’t I just finish writing my diary of the day.
Can’t I just finish making my den that I started in May.
Can’t I just finish looking at iPods on ebay.
Can’t I just stay five minutes?
Well can’t I just stay just four?
Three minutes, then? Two minutes?
Can’t I stay one minute more?
Teddy's poem
Five minutes, five minutes more, please!
Let me stay five minutes more!
Can’t I just play my video game?
To beat my last high score!
Can't I just munch on
One more yummy snack?
Can't I just practice my gymnastics?
I want to land my tuck back
Can't I just look at a couple more stars?
I've seen a bright light, I think it could be Mars.
Can't I just watch one more episode on T.V?
We need to find out who won The British Sewing Bee.
I'll make you a deal, a real pinky promise!
To go early tomorrow, I promise you! Honest!
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